Your nimble fingers harvest
Music from the wind, like a
Myna birds throaty affectations.
At times you seem bound, not
For highways, but the hallways
Of a pythonic egoism.
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The swagger of your jagged
Grin slices open my heart as
If a Reaper’s sickle, I pour
Into you like moonlight cool
And metaphysical, you extract
Me silver from a tremulous
Sensorium and in the night,
Like coyotes, we pursue a
Love that is unspeakable
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My limbs hum the violence
Of a precarious rapture, each
In our own fashion a train
Advancing to some immutable
End. In your vaulted heart the
City craves the consummation
Of a histrionic impetus to fame
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In my heart the prairie, the
Swirling momentum of a
Beatnik dance, the slow sultry
Pulse of a life not hemmed in
By glossy-paged conventions
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I am the Halcyon and you the
Phoenix, if we are destroyed
Only you will rise, so depart
With the sun, sing only and
Never speak of us again
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Submission for
Wow, totally brilliant, the last stanza in itself is truly special! 🙂
Awwww thank you!
harvest music from the wind…really great opening to this…the swagger of the jagged grin…you are full of great lines….in my heart the prairie…that close too…only them rising never speak of us again….seriously a wicked good piece…i like much…
Oh wow thank you so much Brian =) I am so glad you liked it!
Fantastic composition! The heart you slice is mine, the reader, with your ‘moonlight cool’ and ‘unspeakable’ love. Great stuff there. Who knew they coyote sang such ‘tremulous’ songs. Why you of course.
hehe thank you so much =)
Sing only and never speak of us again. Haunting and lovely. Thanks for visiting my blog.
Thank you so much =)
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Oh wow thank you Helen I will have a look =)
This grabbed me right at the start and never let me go! I loved it! Too many great lines to choose a favorite.Flying
Thank you so much! That is great to hear =)