What is life
Without latitude
Or contrast
Where lies love
If not in a chrysalis
Split open by light
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I have been rather OCD lately hence all the syllable counting I think lol Shadorma isn’t a form that comes very easily for me so I wanted to take a crack at it again. I called this Tanka before no idea why lol
oo i like this one much…i def would not like life without contrast and texture….and i like like hte thought of love in chrysalis…
Thank you Brian I need the contrast as well that is what makes life interesting =)
Beautiful words
Thank you =)