The smell of rain
Precedes you
To own my persuasion
Would be to shelter defeat
I cannot abide you
Knowing the pulse
That stirs your heart
Pauses for no one
*
Password protected,
My smile, undulates
Every time you enter
The room
Please don’t perceive me
Haunting you
Leave me
To these
Illicit impressions
My lips against
Your possibility
Repressing
Fate
*
You
Always impoverish
My advance
Without you
I lose the will
To surface
Each morning
*
My avoidant frown
Sickles
Amputates conversation
I won’t let you in
And as long as the sun
Goes on rising
I’ll carry you
Bittersweet
On tip of my tongue
Irretrievable
But never
Lost
*
My poem Apostate was published here
impressive π
Thank you so much Carmen =)
π no prob, i really enjoyed it
=)
Gorgeous – I can sooooo relate to this, brilliant! π π
Thank you Helen!
Lovely….just lovely my friend π
Thank you Anja =)
“My lips against
Your possibility”
lovely.
Thank you LaTonya =)
Beautiful, loved this especially:”Without you
I lose the will
To surface
Each morning”. And congrats on the publishing! π
Thank you so much =)
Soooo beautiful! Love the image of password protected smile. Congrats on the pub — well deserved.
Awwww thank you Marya i am so glad you liked it =)
password protected, my smile undulates…ha…cool lines really like the fluidity through ideas in the opening lines as well…
Thanks Brian =) =)
Password protected / My smile undulates… That’s also my favorite part. Beautiful work π
Thank you Elia =)
Congratulations on creating another masterpiece!
Awwww Lisa that is so sweet =)
Brilliant work. Congrats on the pub! π
Thanks Sonya!
Congrats on publication – that is awesome! π
Thanks!
password protected and amputates conversation…amazing analogies! love it!
Thanks Stacey!