Elena Gallotta
My heart by the hour divides
An embryonic fugitive
Undulating in amniotic tides
There’s no label more definitive
Than the blood underneath my nails
The struggle for survival
Or just affirmation belittles daily
I never wanted to be
One of those worth-less girls
Knees to the pavement begging
To be freed my existence
But here I am just the same
This was so interesting Yves, ‘worthless girl’? no you are not so maybe freedom will come in some other way?
Thank you Michael at the moment a new body would be welcome. Intense physical pain pinched nerves down my entire right side from the wrist to ankle and all the bits between and some subluxations in the thoracic spine that are making my nauseous. I am having a very hard time writing in all senses
Oh dear Yves I am so sorry to hear you are not well. I hope you do manage to come god or better even very soon. My thoughts are with you.
Thank you I just can’t imagine what I have done to myself It started in the wrist and the shoulder (my shoulder is common because I have nerve impingement syndrome and obviously pinched nerves in shoulder cause problems with the arm and hand as well) but my ankle knee and hip as well this morning painkillers don’t help pinched nerves either
Sounds distressing. Hope things improve soon for you.
That was fantastic, Yves. Sorry to hear you’re in pain. 😦
Thank you so much Richard hopefully it will pass soon
I hope so
A powerful piece. You have my best wishes.
Thanks so much Chris
Take it easy Yves! Little pains normally will come and go, and it will. Great write!
Hank
Thanks =)
quite a lot of emotion bottled up in this one…how we never set out to be a certain way but find ourselves there….but survival, hey you have to give props for that…some days that is the best we got…
Thank you Brian and sometimes it really is all we can muster
I often wonder if the lack of pain, suffering and unhappiness keeps someone’s mind from fully developing such insight and creativity. It seems the best poems are created under pain and suffering by many people. I wish you relief from pain.
Thank you so much Hector some of the greatest writers and artists have suffered immensely so I definitely can see the association. I certainly don’t see myself as great or anything but powerful emotions provide a rewarding muse
Lovely piece. Hope you feel better soon. 🙂
Thanks Kev XD
Anytime sweetheart.
I’m so sorry you’re in such pain to create this marvellous write. I do hope it abates.x
Thanks so much for your kind words
I hope you recover soon!
Thank you!
This was such a tender poem, I’m so sorry you’re going through a hard time. Always remember the strength of your words and how they give us solace seeing the beauty in them. Bless you!
Thank you so much Lisa for your beautiful words
I am so sorry that you are in pain. Yet, you managed to write a wonderful poem, filled with imagery.
Awww thank you Sara