Heeding Haiku With HA: Dreaming in Gold

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Her soul-culling hymns

Whip the ether, thick as cream

Barefaced, Spring revives

2

Must I sway to tame

Your uprisings, puppeteer

Sigh, of unjust sighs

Does heaven answer the pangs

Of our marrow or do we

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12 responses to “Heeding Haiku With HA: Dreaming in Gold

  1. The imagery here is incredible – and it really lends POWER and PUNCH, that’s for sure! “Whip the ether, thick as cream” — yow!

    Love it, Yves 🙂

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