I pray for tears
Sparks of forgiveness
Love
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I find indifference
Baseless accusations
Resentment
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I dream of voracious desire
Endless nights
Fire
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I receive broken promises
Haughty reproofs
Deception
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I look into brilliant eyes
Filled with malice
Distant
This one really stands out for me. Thought the presentation was both demanding and at the same time, the words flowed smoothly and efficiently. Wonderful write!
Thank you very much =)
Sometimes what we receive is not what we expect. Well done.
Thank you so much for visiting my site =). Indeed sometimes its a actually a pleasant surprise not in this case but sometimes
A whole gamut of emotion here and so well spoken…
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Excellent use of style and language to convey sad emotions…good writing an here’s to happier days.Vb
Thank you so much =) I hope your days are filled with happiness as well! Thanks for visiting my site =)
This was so sad. Beautifully written 🙂 Thanks for sharing, I know how it is like to be there, I think I had forgotten it but thank you for remining me because I never want to allow myself forgeting the past that now make my present something to be thankful about.
Lu Ann
Thank you so much =) I am so glad your present is happier and I hope you continue to have a life filled with love and happiness.