I set fire to your image,
A simpering candle
Dissolving into sebaceous rain.
I slip into a ragged cape
Woven with the ghosts
Of our conjoined blood.
Arms palpitant in a blind wind,
I head off for your grave,
The rupture in our mission,
The rapacious hills of the dead.
Will I subsist in your absence,
In the cradle of my ineptitude?
Will the smoke darken
On reaching your immobile grin
A reaper to upend you in
The forgetful tides of the river Styx.
–
Life is not so simple
It happens with or without
Acknowledgment,
In the blink of an eye,
In the midst of bone-stripping fire.
It stops for no man whatever his value.
I pray and preach to an empty choir.
How your death sickens me,
Whittles away every vestige
Of my salvation and humanity.
*
Well I managed mysteriously to get a poem in!
And a mystical one at that! 🙂
Thank you =)
Ouch….this one hurt
Painful indeed
WOW…I just don’t know what to say; you knock me out every time.
Thanks Dell that is so sweet =)
Most welcome.
https://dimscribblesdiary.wordpress.com/2015/06/14/wanderers-for-mindlovemisery-wordle-168/
I love the opening.
Thanks I am so glad!
her
mission
was
simple
and
no
one
could
hold
a
candle
to
her
when
it
came
to
clutching
someone
in
their
arms
while
putting
the
image
of
love
into
a
man’s
mind
drawing
the
blood
from
his
hungry
body
made
her
happy
she
always
delighted
in
putting
on
her
red
cape
which
was
a
bit
ragged
around
the
edges
from
years
of
wear
and
tear
and
climbing
the
hill
to
the
abandoned
church
where
the
addicts
slept
and
shot
up
she
smiled
at
the
blind
ghosts
sitting
around
inhaling
smoke
and
slapping
at
their
misty
arms
searching
for
a
vien
they
looked
up
wearily
when
she
entered
and
said
in
unison
Red
Riding
Hood
is
here
it’s
time
to
fade
and
one
by
one
they
disappeared
leaving
her
to
dine
in
peace
Grim and brilliantly composed, I was drawn in like an insect in a trap
Another powerful piece that captures and mesmerizes – and I particularly love the second stanza – it is so amazingly rich – gripping – what adept skill of word usage Yves!
Life is not so simple / It happens with or without / Acknowledgment, / In the blink of an eye, / In the midst of bone-stripping fire. / It stops for no man whatever his value. / I pray and preach to an empty choir.
Astonishingly gratifying. 🙂
Oh wow thank you tremendously for your encouragements!
Wow : “I slip into a ragged cape
Woven with the ghosts
Of our conjoined blood.”
Thank you Melanie!
I read from your latest post to this point, only the brief opening stanza as one poem. It is amazing that each slipped into each other creating a very powerful image of the poet at work
Awww thank you so much Phylor!