Solitude
Tucked in the groves of my imagination
Shaded by my solitude, I dream
Released on the leaves of self-discovery
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Word Painter
Interwoven with the stars
I polish the landscapes of my poems
Devising reality
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Ossuary
I collapse inward sinking into
The hallowed ground of my imagination
Alone in the decay of my thoughts
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(I will continue to read everyone’s lovely haikus and comment just because I really believe in the power of writing and in all of you. I wish I could participate but my haiku’s aren’t in traditional form as you can see and I was quite happy with them the way they turned out. Thank you so much for reading =))
Great haiku on solitude. Enjoyed them.
I am so glad you did. Thank you for visiting my page =)
i like them all but i think my fav is # 3
Thank you and thank you for your vote =)
Beautiful, beautiful haiku.
All of them are good, but #3 is sublime.
Lady Nyo. There are strains of Saigyo here, and that is wonderful.
Wow thank you so much =)
These are all three very lovely, but I think I like best #2; that last line “devising reality” really captured my heart. 🙂
Thank you so much for your input and your lovely comments =)
I enjoyed each of these, especially Word Painter.
Thanks for your vote and I am so glad you enjoyed them!
Three gems indeed. I had great joy in reading these. Thank you, James.
Thank you very much I am so glad you enjoyed them!
Sounds like a fun place to be…
Certainly my mind is an interesting place to be lol. I have pretty amazing dreams like full length movies so my brain is always churning out stories.
i like them all, but #3 is my favorite 🙂
Thanks for the vote so far 3 is winning =)
Tough choice; all three are wonderful. If I must choose, I’ll go with #2.
Thank you for your lovely compliment and vote =) 2 and 3 are tied again I might submit them both
fine series… enjoyed them 🙂
Thank you very much =)
Beautiful tercets, I enjoyed the take. But doesn’t a haiku hve 17 syllables or less? 🙂
I am not really a traditionalist, I think the sentiment outweighs precision of form
I sometimes think its how the words flow and the mystery of it all that makes a haiku, these were fantastic, never mind the syllables, lets make a new word for it.
Thank you so much and I completely agree =) We definitely should come up with a word!
i loved it. ❤
Went to spam I find several comments do that but it got through.
dont know if my first comment went through, but anyways i Love this. 🙂
Awww thank you so much. I wouldn’t mind reading it twice lol