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She moves like winter
With kisses that burn as an open flame
And eyes like untempered strips of lighting.
She pauses to adjust the strap
Of her red Mary Janes, a cloud tucked
Into her right back pocket like a memo.
–
Her cold escapes me whenever she smiles.
The sun riven over a cup of tea
I watch her rise up on her toes
Drawing sparks from my grey eyes,
Sparks governed by rain,
Sparks that slash without remorse
My faltering pretensions of joy.
–
She stood a long time
On my shoulders, jaded
Self-satisfying, demolishing
Passageways and intersections
My beloved and besieged
My uncompromising mistress
Delilah or Evangeline
Whatever her name
The dilemma remains.
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Great as always Yves. 🙂
Thanks Laurie =)
Ah, a triple, but really you hit it out of the ball park for a home run!
We have a comic here called ‘A Rose is a Rose’ where the gals’ alter ego is a long haired, black leather jacket, Motor-cycle riding, boot wearing, very confident Chic.
Thank you Jules XD
Three prompts – You rock!
Thank you Debi!
I LOVE the first line!
Thank you Mia =)
Magical opening stanza. It sets the tone. Moving like winter is such a cool image. Keeping a cloud tucked into the back pocket as well. Very cool. Pairing the cold with the smile as well goes against what you would expect. Her standing on your shoulder is usually where you would find the conscience as well, which makes this quite personal.
Do you ever wonder if some people even read? Ha.
Thank you so very much, glad you enjoyed it!
I do wonder but I know that some people really do and that makes all the difference XD
This is fantastic:
“a cloud tucked
Into her right back pocket like a memo.”
Thanks so much so glad you liked it XD
Simply “mahvolous” my dear 🙂
Thank you!
you
can
always
see
her
standing
in
the
cold
rain
a
satisfied
smile
on
her
flaming
red
lips
a
smile
with
a
spark
hotter
than
the
sun
hot
enough
to
burn
through
your
jaded
reality
if
you
give
her
the
chance
she
will
steal
your
joy
and
leave
you
empty
your
days
will
turn
gray
and
the
only
thing
you’ll
have
to
show
for
having
met
her
will
be
a
deep
bloody
slash
where
your
heart
used
to
be
she
can’t
help
it
you
know
it’s
just
the
way
she
is
Wow now that is a powerful and intimidating portrait!
Some people are just like that.
They are indeed
Another amazing response to 3 – wow – 3 prompts – and they all work so well in their aspects of complimenting each other. A fantastic tale that offers such a distinctive perspective on companionship and passengers – which, of course, can be travelers on a journey – epic Yves 😀
Wow thank you so much XD
You have incorporated these prompts so well Yves, well done.
Thanks Michael!
So clever, my dear to include two prompts and it flowed so well…great take on this photo!
Thank you Oliana!
Kind and beautifully talented..
Suki xxxo
Awww thank you Suki =)
Good piece of work, nice job.
Thanks so much!
Thanks so much for sharing your blog…wonderful and I love the poems especially. Thanks also for visiting my short story over on Morgen Bailey’s pages and liking A Walk to Destiny….thanks so much. Do pop in to my blog again.
Thank you so much and it was my pleasure! I will absolutely be popping by again =)
Thanks so much and so shall I 🙂