My lips stumble
under a blood orange sky.
My bruised and blessed breath
breaks apart in repetition.
You plow me like a field,
patient until bursting.
I swallow your seed,
your vox populi,
your furnace full of stars.
I am a beautiful way to drown.
The ocean in you
feeds the ocean in me.
I will always find a place for you,
a place where everything
is taken whole
and nothing is rejected.
I watch your lips sulking
beneath a blameless horizon
our silhouettes eerie in the half-light,
our silhouettes throbbing hot
like a meteor shower.
–
my writing is still off
Beautifully written!
Thank you!
You are welcome!
If this is ‘off’, it’s pretty damn good!!
Awww thanks =)
🙂
kaykuala
Readily fulfilling to be able to soak in all the goodness!
Hank
Thank you Hank!
This is a magnificent poem. Really beautiful. That ocean part really got me. 💯🤗
WOW thank you for the tremendous compliment 🙂
Wonderful
Thank you =)
😃😃
We write what needs written…
That we do!