“Mate” by Anne Worner CC BY-SA 2.0
In the inconstant ravages of midday
I drink of your succulent greys,
of your endless repetitions.
Winning accounts for only a fraction
of our experiences, we lose everyday.
I stand here challenging my failures,
the pawn of my genius watered down.
I will not be made palatable.
I will not be made to adhere.
The only geometry worth the commute
is the human heart. Those slovenly angles
really get me going, even now
in this wrangling heat, the muse seizes hold
shaking me free of my rumpled dress.
–
We were young once, too young
to appreciate the distress of bones
huddled beneath orgasmic flesh.
Too young to know the intimacy
imposed by silence. I love you
in ways both innocuous and forbidden.
I’d kill for you, an oath not undertaken lightly.
We only seem casual, ordinary
but on the inside we are slicks
of versicolored gasoline, ready to ride
the circuitous waves of our ever deepening
sense of self. To truly understand life
you’ve got to jettison your identity entirely.
I will not be tagged, stacked, and sequestered
by your quadratic pretenses, the I before am
is completely unnecessary, be for nothing
else matters, not even the reward.
–
cutting it close time-wise barely managed a quick poem.
Oh my.
“The only geometry worth the commute
is the human heart.”
“We were young once, too young
to appreciate the distress of bones”
“versicolored gasoline, ready to ride”
“I will not be tagged, stacked, and sequestered”
Just, totally … wow.
Thank you for your beautiful comment!
You perform well under pressure.
Thank you =)
You’re welcome.
Wow! This is excellent! 🙂
Thank you XD
I really like “succulent greys of your endless repetition” and “the distress of bones within the flesh” great visuals with those words. Lots of emotions in there!
Thanks Mark for your lovely compliment!
“I will not be made palatable.”: Perfect.
Your words create an aura of awakening, of a dormant power coming to rise. Well-penned.
I hope that you are doing good, Yves.
Oh wow thanks Anmol! You know forward and reverse, up and down haha How are you?
What dead lines…???
I do not always do the prompt on the day it is posted.
Maths a necessary evil? That’s what my better half is for…the partnership. The human calculator… he is, part of his job.
I’ll round out the edges of the valentine so the two of us can laugh.
That’s the best formula to calculate… how much laughter and love we can make. 🙂
That is very sweet Jules, my husband is the math genius too haha
I see some commercials for specialized after school educational programs where 8 – 12 year old children have smiles on their faces saying they have taken physics and advance math college courses… More power to them. I hope they can help save our planet or find us a new one!
Oh wow! I have never taken a physics class myself
Neither have I!
I think I might have had some Algebra.
But substituting numbers for letters and symbols is confusing. At least for me.
I am terrible with numbers
Reblogged this on Teacher as Transformer and commented:
The picture drew me first. I read the caption, “Mate” and recognized its double-meaning. The poem is rich and speaks to the life-long committment we make to each other. Part way through the line, “The only geometry worth the commute
is the human heart,” catches my eye. It captures the give and take in strong relationships that exist because they can and have the right geometry.
Great pic, re-blogged here: https://talesfromtheloublog.wordpress.com/2016/02/05/pic-of-the-day-mate/
Thanks for the reblog =)
My pleasure, truly a great pic!
Well – I haven’t missed you this time (in the link up 😉 )
I’m sitting here – reading this poem Yves – and re-reading it – and reading again. I have gotten up and walked away – done odds and ends … to return to read it again.
And frankly, I don’t know where to start. There are far too many lines that singularly or combined – impact with such force – of language, sentiment, metaphor, meanings, – executed so incredibly well – with a precision to be found in the “battle ground” of a chess game – which in itself could translate into a metaphor for life – that honestly, my head is spinning.
Sometimes we “stumble” across precisely what we need in that moment – whether we appreciate the irony of it or not – simply because it is “our due” – and it seems, today, this is “my case.”
As Ivonprefontaine noted in his comment to you – you have captured an essence that cuts through to the heart of the matter – understanding and transcribing in a manner that transforms and transcends – which, in some respects, is a curse – and yet a true blessing.
Thank you for your response to this week’s photo challenge Yves.
Pat
Oh wow Pat what a tremendous compliment, thank you so much!
As an aside – I hope to get to that email to you – later today – my head is in an odd space 😉
My head is an odd space
roflmao …. well then, perhaps, since I have just come to understand and finally slowly accept this longstanding knowledge of myself – see – today, I’m tripping on things I “need” – notice I said “my head is IN” – when the truth is – to quote you – “my head IS” – well, perhaps you might be generous enough to allow me company with you, while I sit within the cauldron? 😉
Of course XD
thank you XD
and I’ll try to catch you later 🙂
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You’ve got to read this stunning piece of work. Just read and admire.