She rides the soles
Of my quickening boots,
An ink stain,
A Rorschach, a silhouette
Churning in ambivalent light.
I fear that she does not
Love me anymore.
She envies my density
And I in turn the wisp
Of her figure for it knows not
The duplicity of angles.
–
Wherever I go she accompanies
Without resolve or solicitation
But in recent months
I have come to sense
Her displeasure.
I find her out of sync,
Ill-fitting and I think
That we are growing apart.
It’s a lack of communication,
These things always are,
But when I press her
She refuses to speak.
–
In time she’ll undress me
Find her way into my heart
And take root as all those before.
In time the color will fade
From my eyes and then the eyes
From my face and I’ll become her.
Wowza, this is good, Yves. Must tell you that at first, I misread “she envies my density”, as “destiny”. The way you wrote it is, as always, Brilliant and peerless (not to mention, it makes perfect sense)–nonetheless, my “misread” definitely has me pondering on a whole ‘nuther “shadow level”!! So it’s possible you’ve given me something to work with, for this prompt 🙂
Thank you so much! Destiny does indeed add an interesting dimension =)
Glad you agree 🙂
Great take on the prompt Yves, I love the suggestion of becoming her in time…..excellent poem….thanks for being part of the Tale Weaver….
Thank you Michael =)
Wow! This is really well done. The last stanza is especially moving. Some really powerful and ominous imagery you’ve painted here. Amazed! 🙂
Oh wow Yash thank you for your incredibly kind words!
Awesome poetry!
Oh wow thanks!
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Wow … what a poem! Very insightful …
Thanks Georgia!