Ever since the cabbages died
Her smile is a partition.
Beside it I rest a Paper Tiger
An altruist tearing
His pockets in shame
But no man has the right
To claim a woman’s pain.
She called them cabbages
But they were always children
Our sons and daughters.
Anabiosis cannot be
Breathed through war,
Whether meteor or bomb
Heat curdles just the same.
Ever since the cabbages died
I sit on the porch in silence
Draught after draught
A beggar’s bowl
Between my knees
I asked God first
But some prayers
Only the Devil will seize.
No woman has the right
To censure a man’s retreat.
A visage twinged
Sings the saddest songs
But who will listen?
The days are sparse
The days are wearisome.
Default or defunct
Each man crawls along
A broken heart cutting
The palms and knees
Of whoever greets him.
She called them cabbages
But they were always children
Our sons and daughters
Taken by the Country
To fight in wars that the rich
Should have sufficient fodder
To seed their seedy schemes.
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I took one look at this Wordle and knew immediately that it was going to be a challenge. I mean really what was I thinking?! Thanks to Jen for introducing me to Tim Buckley because it gave me inspiration for this piece.
This entry is for
https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2015/02/23/wordle-49-february-23-2014/
I enjoyed this very much Yves. For me your words conjured up images of country women doing it tough, barefoot and pregnant and knowing their children would be taken for purposes they had no control over. Well done.
Yes Michael exactly that image was in my mind as well Thank you so much for your kind words
the taking of children is heart breaking….esp when you get to the end and realize they were sent off to fight the riches wars…sadly all too much a reality…
It is heart-breaking Brian, it really is
Everytime they are called cabbages, it brings pain. I enjoyed the depth and helplessness this poem depicts. Certainly a Gem.
The wordle is challenging and your entry makes it even more. I’m hoping to put across mine.
Thank you Neeraj I found it painful to read “cabbages” as well I know I wrote it but I was listening to music and it effected me very strongly this topic
I am excited to see yours, this Wordle was a hard one
The wordle was a hard one, for sure…great challenge for me….I like how you used the words….the sorrow of all mothers in your poem…
Thank you so much =) It sure was haha
Wonderful poem, yes, wars make the poor to the interest of the rich !!
Thanks for stopping by Leovi!
Your poem deciphers a really nice message that war only brings sorrow.
Thank you so much =)