1
Cast off stilettos,
A star-crossed stumble
Through an open flame
2
Sunlight streams
Through the cracks
Of my slackening fist
3
A mirror, in revulsion, cracks
To whom should I address
My questions now?
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I wanted to do more and may later but I am struggling to find my words at the moment. I am inspired to write and stuck at the same time, just too much competition in my head!
For
https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2015/01/28/heeding-haiku-with-ha-jack-kerouac/
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I wish I had the poetic ability in my resume but I don’t…
I started with only the desire to write poetry
These are nicely done, Yves.
Thanks Celestine!
The third one is Superb!
Thank you XD
From the three set of haikus, I absolutely love the thrid one! Great poetic deliver! All the best to you, Aquileana 😀
Thank you Aquileana!
seriously, that second one is pretty amazing….
there is some cool symbolism to the light creeping in when
the fist begins to open
Wow thanks Brian!
I too loved the second one. Very well-penned.
And I hope that you are doing good and settling in just perfect at your new place. 🙂
Thank you very much Anmol! I might be going a bit crazy but I do love the new house!
That is great. 🙂
Yes, maravillsos haikus, the second is my favorite!
Thanks Leovi XD