Chiara Fersini
Do you read the creases in my letters
The anxious braille of my honest heart?
Do you caress the shrill curve
Of my unmitigated tears
As they fumble over linear veins?
Do your eyes note with satisfaction
My dignity jostled and adrift?
Do you blow tenderly on the paper
To coerce or cauterize?
Do you substitute each shadowed pearl
As a cryptoquote
For a passage poignantly spent?
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I am so tired today I can’t seem to string 2 words together geez
Reblogged this on Heartafire.
Thanks for the reblog =)
If this is how you write, when tired, heaven knows what you will accomplish when your not – smiles – excellent Yves. x
Thank you so much Jenny for your kindness!
xx
Absolutely beautiful
Thank you so much!
You probably write better when you’re feeling off Yves. Love it.
Laurie.
I have been told that Laurie lol
I think it’s true. I know I do my best poetry when I’m down.
Wonderful creative world ls the relief of feelings! Beautiful poem!
Thanks Leovi!
You’ve strung these words together beautifully. As always!
Thank you Tony XD
This is great work, Yves. 🙂
Thanks Celestine =)
Even when tired you manage to create, but then I believe you may have no choice in this matter 🙂
Thank you so much Hector that is so kind
ha. well you may be pretty tired but that opening line has hook…the reading of the crease of the letter and braille of the love is a very cool line….
Thanks Brian glad to hear it!
Tired or not my dear Yves, your muse inspires you so well. What a lovely feeling poem, love your use of metaphors … brava!
Thank you Georgia I do love metaphors haha
And you do know how to use them so beautifully … I envy you!
Awww thank you, you are amazingly talented Georgia so that means a lot coming from you