Without effort or effect
You became that which I sought
Who is this woman
Who answers to my name
In a voice of origin?
I, who have been
So sullen in her company
Have never known her
To possess, a smile
Whose hands are these?
Darkened with gathering steam
I want for naught
For eternity
For skeins of red thread
With which I might sew
A singular star into
My thread-less bones
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I am happy to say I finished cleaning! I am sad to say I had no time to write so this comes to you in a hurry
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‘Threadless bones’ I like. You have the ability to capture feelings and emotions so succinctly Yves, nicely done.
Thank you so much Michael that means a lot because you are so good at stirring emotions with your words
You are most welcome.
Lovely words for something written I haste, beautiful as always!! 🙂
Awww thanks Helen =)
I recommend that you continue speed-writing. Nicely done.
Thanks Mike I should practice just to see what happens before I’ve thought and doubted too much haha
ha. glad you got your cleaning done…that has to feel good….
this comes across as feeling the disconnection from yourself..
when we truly stop and look at ourselves….
It does and my apartment was in need!
Indeed I often feel disconnected and unreal
You had no time to write? Good Lord, it never seems that way when I read it. From where I’m sitting, that is perfectly formed prose!
Awww thank you Tony that is so kind XD
Beautiful!
Thank you Kev =)
🙂
“For skeins of red thread
With which I might sew
A singular star into
My thread-less bones” – amazing. I think you will forever be known as the redefiner of Writers Block and sentences like “no time to write” 😀
Awww that is incredibly sweet
Your hurried words are well written?
Thanks Kim XD
When inspiration strikes you gotta catch it. Otherwise it’s too soon gone.
Thank you Larry so true
Lovely! You managed to write and clean? I must admit, I’m envious.
Thank you Heidi =)
Poemal Wonderful ! Yes, you coserías a beautiful red star !
Thanks so much Leovi =)
This is good!
Thank you Celestine!