There exists no quantifiable measure of attention
But had I yours I would store it in my marrow
That the essence of you would embellish
The essence of me, two held without division
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I watch your eyes enter trackless schools
Swimming between edifice and eventuality
Never do they stir the fathoms of my reflection
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I am not the one absent, the vampiric stowaway
Whose only inclination is scarlet
You are the sand without a requisite polish
The heat of passage and compression
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I have been cleaning and once I get obsessed I find it hard to shift gears
Very cool poem!! 🙂
Thanks Helen!
Awesome write, I loved the last part best! 🙂
Thank you I was a little unsure of myself
Never be unsure of yourself. Your work is wonderful and will certainly touch someone each time!!
Thanks so much Skye =)
some interesting pairings in this….
the edifice and eventuality
the passage and compression
also interesting you say what you are not
but what he is
Thank you Brian!
Ha! Cleaning house, noting the disconnect in witty ways. This is a new favorite, listing the woulds and noting the absent. Yet it’s also very very sad.
Awww thanks Susan indeed I have felt quite lonely lately
MEEE….TOOOO…..LOL, love the cleaning metaphors….
lol my poem wasn’t about cleaning though I am certain that crept in as that was on my mind
I know but when I looked at your comment and re-read it, it seemed to have crept into your piece! 🙂
No doubt lol
Love the imagery and if you are really cleaning…sounds like you are meditating a lot!
My mind wonders when I am cleaning
Me too… I clean more when I need to sort out something in my mind.
I find it meditative sometimes I wash the dishes by hand because it lets me sort things out, though I am admittedly rather messy
So brilliant you are Mindlovemisery….Kiss Kiss
Thanks so much!