There is shape in disbelief
In the premeditation of
A prehensile tongue
Relinquishing dissent
Without motivation
The future is lost
*
I have come to stand in
Opposition to every sage
Who dare illumine my path
Don’t let me find inside
The same infirmity
Don’t my heart sustain war
Lest I find within
A human greed
*
In the company of others
I find myself unforgivable
Let each man be a mirror
That no man should live
In dissimulation
This is haunting, but I love it.
Thanks =)
I love the last stanza the most specially the last three lines. Words full of wisdom my friend. Take care and God bless.
Than you Samina I am so happy =)
Transparency….it is what saved my life. When I allowed others to see the real me, I began to live. I am not sure if that is where you were going with this, but it is what it meant to me. Dissimulation…..never again. As always, well done!!.
I am so glad you did Skye because you are beautiful =) There is a belief that when we dislike someone else it is because they reflect a truth about ourselves that we do not wish to see
That is so true. I always try and ask God what it is about me that is wrong in my spirit when I dislike an attitude about someone else. I can usually find something. Once I pray about that, I usually find I am not as bothered. You are beautiful, as well, dear friend. Inside and out!! Thank you for your sweet words.
Thanks so much Skye I find I feel better once I have meditated on it, my negative feelings for the other person diminish and sometimes I even grow fond of the person
Bravo!! Very wise words indeed!! 🙂 🙂
Thank you Helen =)
Very powerfull and reasonating, from first part to the last.
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Outstanding!!!
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Got me. I’ll have to think about this all day.
I gave Skye a little explanation hehe
Very profound.
Thank you =)
those last couple lines…last stanza so strong…love standing in opposition to t sages…ha….finding yourself unforgiveable is a bit sad…but the mirror line is awesome….
Thank you so much Brian! I am glad you liked it =)
I have come to stand in
Opposition to every sage
Who dare illumine my path
i share the same skepticism Yves,
i turn a deaf ear to those who ‘know’.
your poetry never ceases to amaze. ty for that!
Thank you for your kind words =)
Beautiful verse,.My regards.jalal
Thank you Jalal =)