My heart whittles away all intermediary
None who enter shall ever replicate her song
In the absence of data there is always instinct
That I exist is the only catalyst essential to expression
*
I dream of brush-fires and lightening
Of incidentals and incendiaries
I am intolerant of dysfunction
When it overtakes my composition
To be an alien in the the desert
Is exceptional only in the clarity
Of a well-articulated obligation
Better to be the only Venusian
In a fountain of supple dreams
*
All these delusions
These unsolicited truths
Shed on gestation
They are mine to gather
Who else exists that can
Define precisely their shape?
*
I exist in the minutiae
In the dalliances
Of stones and silhouettes
The muse’s pock-marked face
Composed in odyssey
I am not afraid of demons
Only of men who speak falsely
*
Were I without hope
I’d cease scavenging
Were I without gratitude
My pen would halt
Its recursive sonnet
*
I am an optimist canvassing
Hell for a paradise lost
A misfit who sees angels
In the veils of the prosaic
*
My non appointment appointment took an unexpectedly long time. Though there was a scheduling error and they sent me home as soon as I arrived I spent a weird amount of time trying to get home again. I didn’t have much time to write and I now have the pressure of knowing the appointment isn’t even over yet!
love the last verse.! 🙂
in the veils of the prosaic live angels who are of human nature but whose hearts and wings are loaded with golden protection…for us…or we’d perish from disconsolation.
was sorry to hear ur aptmt didnt happen. It might be providential …and you can find solutions within self..like finding keys that are hiding but you didnt look in the right place…the first time. 🙂
That is absolutely beautiful =)
I have another appointment for this week I feel I have to at least meet the guy see what happens
Brilliant , I love the last stanza especially!! 🙂 🙂
Thank you Helen I am so happy =)
Your lack of appointments isn’t dampening your talent. Beautiful.
Thanks Laurie =)
Last 2 for me Yves , love the title also, beautiful, it is clear your pen has not halted. x
Thank you Jenny =)
i am not afraid of demons but men who speak falsely….ha…true…why worry at what i can not see, when the one that is right in front of me is lying….
Thanks for reading Brian!
As usual your image takes me away and your words are stunning…the last stanza hits me most…maybe because I could never get through Paradise Lost…it scared me too much…
I actually haven’t read it at all I know horrible I need to try
I had to read part of it in university and never finished it. Being raised Catholic, devils scared me to death.
I’m always disappointed when appointments don’t happen. I don’t know what to do with myself then! I especially loved the last four lines. 🙂
Thanks Tony =) I don’t work but that must seriously piss off people who do having to miss their job for no reason.
Brilliant poem, the power is overwhelming. My favourite parts were the last 4 lines and this:”I exist in the minutiae
In the dalliances
Of stones and silhouettes
The muse’s pock-marked face
Composed in odyssey
I am not afraid of demons
Only of men who speak falsely”
Awww thank you Oloriel =)
“In a fountain of supple dreams”
“I exist in the minutiae
In the dalliances
Of stones and silhouettes”
I’ve missed reading your poetry. Wonderful 🙂
Awww thank you I have missed you as well Bianca =)
“In the absence of data there is always instinct” — this has to be my favorite line
Thank you! I operate mostly on instinct myself haha