The darkness around which
Stars are posthumously hung
*
My clay feet know
Both earth and sea
But the sky aspires
Higher and higher
With every extension
*
With my vertebrae
Horizontally stacked
I could go on forever
For a circle ends
Exactly as it begins
But if vertical,
I will undoubtedly fall
(I stand up
In spite of fear)
*
I carry you in silence
For it is through silence
That melody is relayed
*
My pulse struggles
Under the pressure
Of our overlapping breaths
Together we are imperishable
For no wrath exists
That can dissolve regard
Wonderful!! Really love this one!! 🙂 🙂
Thanks Helen that makes me happy!
“For no wrath exists
That can dissolve regard”
I love these lines specially. Otherwise what a beautiful poem my friend. You amaze me every time. Keep it up.
Awww Samina you are such a sweetheart thank you
My pleasure my lovely friend.
=)
This is wonderful, the last 2 stanzas especially, well penned Yves.
Thank you so much Jenny =)
“With my vertebrae
Horizontally stacked
I could go on forever
For a circle ends
Exactly as it begins
But if vertical,
I will undoubtedly fall
(I stand up
In spite of fear)” – my favourite part. Amazing write, as usual! 🙂
Thank you so much I am so happy you liked it!
“I stand up in spite of fear,” sigh…me most days. 🙂
Loved this, Sweet Friend!!!!
Thank you Skye and for the retweet!
You are so welcome…I am never sure if I am tweeting or retweeting or just whistling Dixie…..Twitter confuses me. But, you are welcome!!
It confuses me too lol
nice…i like how you go from large scale like the sky to the bones stacked….in the opening stanza i wonder if you switched from ‘posthumously hung’ to ‘ hung, posthumous’ as it would take advantage of an obvious rhyme….
Thanks Brian!
I like reading good poetry, especially on my birthday. Excellent work! I love the flow of this poem.
Thank you so much Cody and Happy Birthday!
exquisite writing!
Thank you so much Scott =)