My hands
Have become worn
Reverting paper into pith.
My heart woke
With a requiem.,
Silver and spiritless.
Underneath the Bodhi tree
I find neither epiphany
Nor inveiglement.
*
Today is still
And with heavy eyes
I consume in silence
The exhaust
Of countless
Defeated sighs.
In the next inhalation
A star will find, within me,
Some distant ancestor
But for now
I am without whim
*
I’ll save my wishes
For another day
A day of turmoil
A day when the ink
Spills motley and riotous
In the articulation
Of carefully
Arranged winds
Tomorrow I’ll be
Jackson Pollock
FANTASTIC.
Especially:
“My heart woke
With a requiem.,
Silver and spiritless.”
And:
“A day when the ink
Spills motley and riotous
In the articulation
Of carefully
Arranged winds”
Just gorgeous. And loooove the star visual. So much.
Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed =)
This is so beautiful, and I love the image of the stars! Favourite line(s):
I consume in silence
The exhaust
Of countless
Defeated sighs.
Just stunning. Shine on bright star! Love, H xxxx
Thank you that image is fantastic I was so excited when I found it lol
Seriously cool, the last few lines are a classic taking the poem into a whole other field entirely – love it!! 🙂 🙂
Thank you Helen I am so glad you liked it!
This is so beautiful. I love the wistfulness and gentleness of this piece. Fantastic work. 🙂
Thank you so much it was fun to write =)
Just found more (of you) in my email subscriptions. A beautiful write dear MLM. Also, thanks for your email address – I hopefully will write today, if not – tomorrow.
Kind regards.
Anna :o]
Thank you so much Anna =) I will look forward to it
You have an amazing way with words… Such a talent! Keep it up…. love your stuff.
Thank you Ray!
I consume in silence
The exhaust
Of countless
Defeated sighs.
so much said in that…and with feeling…
i really like the end on being pollock tomorrow…ha….very cool…
Thank you Brian =)
Fantastic, M. It’s packed with beautiful expressions. I love every line.
Thank you Elia =)
Love this so much…..well done!!! Love the ending!
Thanks Skye!
Every line contains such heartening beauty and your ending is superb!
Awww thanks Lisa!
Very beautiful indeed.
Thank you very much =)
My pleasure my friend.
Beautiful and captivating words, I am truly blessed to be able to get a dose of your poetry each day 🙂
Thank you soooooo much =)
inveiglement – great word 🙂
You have such a unique voice and insight. Your words always stir and enlighten. Thank you 🙂
Awww thank you that is incredibly sweet of you