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1

Who exists

That does not euphemize

With metaphor?

Who exists

That speaks of their faults

With neither pride

Nor placebo?

2

I have lied

To spare myself

I do not

Know how to face

Your pain

Without my ego

Assuming

A comparative

Misfortune

I do not

Know how to court

Your brilliance

Without

Turning on

Artificial lights

That I might not

In proximity

Darken

3

I was not born a poet

I neither command

Nor navigate the stars

Sometimes

Paranoia drives me

Underground

Into cellars

Pungent with decay

That I might

Entertain my vices

Unobstructed

4

Emancipated

By confession

I compose

These words

In the residue

Of an instinctive

Retreat

Shamelessly

Esoteric

I speak

Only that

I might be

Relieved

*

I was just contemplating certain aspects of human nature, I used the pronoun ā€œIā€ broadly though I am guilty of being egocentric at times as well

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26 thoughts on “Egoism Snippets

  1. You have great insight into the different aspects of human nature. We are all guilty of being egocentric at times. You use very strong words that come across powerfully. Beautifully written. šŸ™‚

  2. I love how this starts,
    Who exists

    That does not euphemize

    With metaphor?
    I love this and I am equally taken by the concluding sentence. Your work gives me much to contemplate, you express yourself in such amazing imagery. As Cubby says, beautiful!

  3. This:
    “I have lied
    To spare myself
    I do not
    Know how to face
    Your pain
    Without my ego
    Assuming
    A comparative
    Misfortune”

    This rings so true… Brilliant.

  4. Awesome poem. You know, I really enjoy your poems. Just reading the words before the overall meaning sinks in is enjoyable. Good stuff. Thanks for sharing! šŸ™‚

  5. “I have lied
    To spare myself
    I do not
    Know how to face
    Your pain
    Without my ego
    Assuming
    A comparative
    Misfortune”

    Fantastic poem!

  6. “I was not born a poet
    I neither command
    Nor navigate the stars”
    I suspect you were born a poet (or you were an exceptional pupil with an excellent teacher). I think you have an inner astrolabe that will always steer you through the cosmos. And, a star map in your soul should you decide to travel.

  7. hi mindlovemisery, it’s not often i read a poem and see so much of myself reflected, as i have in yours, ty. it’s brilliantly written and composed and forgive me for differing with you in my first comment, i suspect you were born with a poet’s soul. just wanted to visit a bit to acknowledge and thank you for following my poetry, and shining the light to yours.

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