My heart pivots to the left
Inches toward your salted lips
Waste not your breath
My hands already grip
Of your eccentricity
My dirty nails
Having dug so deeply
Into your sympathetic chest
Do not seek
As you are
I lie in our bed
Still but for the raised pulse reaped
From an artless moon
You collapse in waves
Tears unfastening slowly
Wounds stinging sweetly
In my excavated palms
All delusions are pardoned
You sort of get 3 today well they were tied in my mind. Can you tell I am in the mood to snuggle with hubbie. This is a picture of my husband years ago being silly, he is such an innocent person and I think this picture shows it lol
27 thoughts on “Assent”
Lovely!!! 🙂 🙂
Thank you Helen =)
This is beautiful. The intensity of it all. The passion. The love. It is nothing short of amazing. I wish to have this some day.
Awwww thank you so much =) I am sure you will find love!
Very nice…really love the way the words flow so effortlessly!
Thanks Sonya =)
Very lovely and it does sound cuddly! 😀
Thank you he is such a snuggly person I can’t imagine people don’t throw themselves at him in the streets lol
I say the same for my husband. He bloody smells like freshly baked chocolate chip cookies, I never let him go out alone thinking someone will snag him.
Sam smells amazing too, the smell really gets me since that is my best sense haha
Smooth and passionate, just lovely!
Awww thanks Lisa =)
ha…there is def a was intimacy there…and the need not to hold delusions but just be real with each other…what a comfort that is….
There is, I never thought I could be so comfortable with another person, Sam tells me that he is more comfortable with me then inside his own mind lol
This is wonderful!!! Blessings to you both!
Thanks Skye =)
Ugh I love your writing!!!! I wanna snuggle. 😦 Wait, not your hubby. hahaha
Haha snuggling is awesome =)
You can snuggle me instead =)
In all your words, the love of your man comes through…but this one…a wee more intimate…really shines a light on your feelings…the pic is awesome…shows a human within a human..
Thank you so much Grizz that is so sweet =)
You wrote with simple words in this poem I didn’t even need Google Translate lol… I love it. It reads so natural, so effortless.
Thanks Elia =) I am glad to hear that lol
🙂 Tender and warm and fuzzy. Lucky in love…