Petulant seas press
My diaphanous heart deep
Verse from fossils traced
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Dark and lyrical
Primordial currents sire
An alien harvest
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Auric sky dipping
Beneath molten copper seas
Bohemian eve
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Coquettish waves lick
The hull of a besotted boat
Sailors imbibed whole
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Ah! Your haiku are the best! You should publish a collection as a book!! 🙂 🙂
I would love to make a book of haiku I just haven’t fully grasped self-publishing haha If I ever do get together my haiku book I will be happy to send you one =)
🙂 🙂
Beautiful work… 🙂
Thank you!
Amazing lines, you know, I think anyone can paint a picture with a haiku,but you paint a picture I would hang in my living room!
Awwww thank you that is so sweet =)
Perfection!! 😀
Thanks so much!
The last one is so flirtatious with those old tars drinking in her beauty!!
Cheers!!
Thanks Nanka =)
Wonderful set, Candice. The last one is real good
Thank you so much Celestine you are so kind =)
ooo i really like the auric/bohemian one…ha, the last one too…nice use of big words…making me work overtime on the dictionary…smiles.
Thank you so much Brian, yes my weird vocabulary lol
I Agree, good use of words to develop images.
Thanks Scott =)
These are really mind bending… how do you think it up:) Glorious.
Thank you so much =)
wonderful to read…I drink in every word with a sip of coffee…I enjoyed them all.
Awww thank you Grizz that makes me so happy =)
I learn more vocabularies by reading one or two poems of yours than a long novel haha… Great work. I particularly love the third one.
haha thanks so much
This is so richly textured — gorgeous!
Thank you Marya =)
I particularly like the last group of words.
Awww thanks Nessa =)
Loved the old world charm of Bohemian eve the most and I really find your choice of words fascinating!!
Thanks Reshma =)
Lovely, I enjoyed the imagery of coquettish waves 🙂
Thank you so much Anna =)
Petulant seas, Primordial currents, Coquettish waves ………now that’s what a beauty is made of.. 😀
Thank you so much! You are so kind =)
Oh, love the ‘Coquettish waves’ -the wordplay symbolizes flirtation. Fantastic!!. 🙂
Thank you so much Panchali =)
Am in awe of your vocabulary aside from your deep haiku. Very nice…love the darkness and mystery.
Thank you Maggie you are so kind =)
Lovely! Particularly love “Coquettish waves lick
The hull of a besotted boat
Sailors imbibed whole”
Thank you that seems to be the consensus lol