Ribs drawn taunt like a corset
I listen to your breathy voice
And your heart on the
Verge of collapse.
Flesh from language
I watch your cupid’s pout
Inching toward my chastity
Two days hardly any sleep sorry I wasn’t able to offer anything better for today! I could not find an image that satisfied me either
27 thoughts on “Corset”
I love shape poetry. You’ve done it really well here! I almost found myself breathing in when I got to the middle.
Awww thank you I am so happy you enjoyed it =)
It’s a wonderful poem and the pic is perfect 🙂
Thanks so much!
You’re welcome 🙂
A very shapely poem. 😉 Love it.
Yay! I am so happy =)
Short, succinct, precise, perfectly measured!! Well done!! 🙂 🙂
Thanks Helen =)
cupids pout inching toward my chastity…oh my….really nice line….ha nice little concrete poem too….happy thursday
Thanks so much Brian it was fun =)
I thought it was great!! 🙂
Thanks Skye =)
Love this M! Can’t stop reading its breathtaking words!
I am so happy to hear that =)
Thanks Lisa! I am so happy you did =)
Don’t say sorry. No one expects a better poem because this is a great one, great words from start to finish.
Thank you Elia =)
that good old hourglass figure! Seductive write! Got my imaginative juices just a-flowing!
I am glad to hear it Scott!
I like this …mainly because it takes me in so many different directions…life …love…death…
not to bad for a few words…
Thanks Grizz =)
very nice pic.. and the hidden poem inside.. written down 🙂
Thank you =) I love your name btw!
thanks .. it so hot poem 🙂 hehe.. made me little mad 🙂