Dreams plucked from the sand
Where they lay, silver dragons
Opposing the sea
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My desert heart waits
For your indulgent smile
To redress the cracks
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Heart slit base to stem
Time wasted can’t be respent
The hourglass runs red
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Confession pending
You brush the sand from your hands
Keen for a response
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Submission for
mindlovemisery 
Excellent work!
Thanks Melanie =)
All wonderfully done and progressively got better!! Lovely!!
Awww thank you Nanka =)
nice…i like how you used the sand and hour glass in this to tell your story…the cracks in the glass…you are right, time is one of our most precious commodities…
wow thank you very much Brian =) It is indeed
I especially like the third haiku.
Awww thank you Ann =)
Awww thank you Ann =)
This has an air of mystery throughout the whole poem. I am very curious!Sand
Thank you =)
All wonderful, but I have a special feeling for the second one.
Thanks Sara =)
How lovely!! The last one is awesome!
Thanks Usha =)
I feel a drama building here ~ need to know more ~ you must write the next instalment x
Thanks!
Each one is wonderfully composed but the second verse about heart parched for smile is simply marvelous Candice 🙂
Awww thank you Reshma =)