Eyes like overturned Jack-o-lanterns
Lids peeling backwards, hysterical
As a fish mutely mouthing oxygen
Lips as thin as a Butcher’s wire drawn
Back in a panicked snarl over anemic
Gums and teeth nested like a bear trap.
Sebaceous flesh riddled with detaching
Pustules, raw as a hyde-stripped deer
Or an amateurishly applied Hellraiser
Visage peeling, dripping downward,
This face as sobering as a suicide
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Impish limbs spindling, delicate jutting
From tumescent core, the tide-battered
Body of a week old surfer, a fruit pregnant
With decay and ethylene, a fleshless spine
Curved outward like a child-bearing hip
Fingers like the black arthritic roots of an
Oxidized tree, nails pulled free at the seams
Vulnerable beds like unprepared livers, sick
Toxic emanations as subtle as sewage
From intestines grotesquely exposed
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Such was the vision I found upon waking
No memories forthcoming to clarify the
Acquisition of this cadaverous mantle, no
Means of extraction, unzipping the costume
Surely worn. Thankfully numb a static wire of
Prickling infestation as if ants were being
Fired across my synapse in a futuristic hive
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Blinds crashing sharply, locks sinking into
Metal pockets, telephones dismantled entirely
Clothes indistinguishable from flesh, left
On for a skeleton-stripping shower, bleached
Bones surely an improvement to this crucible
Of repugnant human soup offensively sloshing
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I chose a significantly less disgusting image because well I didn’t want to see this lol I was still manic when I wrote this
Wow, that’s incredible!!!! 🙂
Oh Helen thank you so much =)
geez….now that is a rather grisly visage to wake up to eh? the sloshing soup of human something ha…errr ants in the brain or not i might try to go back to bed…and promise myself never to drink the punch again…smiles…
What kind of punch do you drink Brian lol Thank you =)
Oh, my word! This is most excellent. Some much to love. I especially love “subtle as sewage” and ” repugnant human soup offensively sloshing” wow!
Thank you Melanie it was fun to write!
Oh this is wonderfully, gruesomely good! No – excellent!
Anna :o]
Thank you Anna!
some powerful expressions here. excellent 🙂
Thank you Celestine =)
you paint an interesting picture…Men who drink and go to bars looking for that “one night stand” often wake up to images like that but I am being too macho…nowadays woman also go bar chumming and probably wake up with something that meets your descriptive poem.
I don’t regret that I have never been bar hopping especially after your comment lol