Press your thumbs into
The small of my back, brand me
With vortex kisses
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Puckish prints preserved
On glass, fossils spiraling
On a silver lake
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Cauterized fingers
Leave no trace of existence
A thief’s artful touch
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Your hands wrap around
My heart – imitation ribs,
Fusing prints in blood
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Narcissus’ fingers
Flirt with the lake’s reflection
Bluffing DNA
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I had negative time to write today geez and I am sure it shows! Stressful day
Submission for
Even when you write in a hurry you produce something totally unique and worthy! Applause my friend, applause!! 🙂
Thanks Helen =)
These are nice and so varied!! Like the one on the vain Narcissus in love with self!! The thief is a little crook too!! 🙂
Thank you very much Nanka =)
The first one is brilliant!
Thank you so much =)
Your first one is a gem!
Thank you Maggie =)
I love all of them, but the first one is my favorite…beautiful work!!
Awww thanks Susie =)
Fabulous haiku.So much full of sentiments. Loved it.
Thank you how sweet!
Even on a stressful days , you have managed very good Haiku. Keep the writing up and the stress down.
Awww thank you I will try
Wonderfully done, Candice 🙂
Awww thank you Celestine =)
A great haiku set Candice! It’s just perfect. No stress effect whatsoever!
Hank
Thank you Hank I am happy to hear it
Exquisite!!…but, the last one is my fave :)) Wonderfully penned…really enjoyed reading :))
Thanks Panchali =)
They were all excellent, but I have a special fondness for that last one!
Thank you Sara =)
1st one is my favorite.
Thanks Angie =)
That’s a wonderful Haiku bunch Candice!! The first and the second stand out with their unique prints:)
Thank you Reshma!