You spread like wine
Over a silk dress, a
Copper-mouthed
Carnivore spinning
Contradictions into a
Hypothetical prime
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I’ve got a head full
Of heathen posies,
And a lavender soul
Spilling forward like
A thirsting wisteria
We’re all swaying to
The refrain of your
Avaricious pulse
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Cotton-mouthed with
Misplaced expectations
I watch you slip dimensionless
Into patina, ambidextrous
Heart pocketing the sunrise
And sunset in the same
Thieving swoop
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Great depth to this. Excellent write.
Thank you so much Anthony =)
a head full of heathen posies and a lavender soul….ha…love those lines…nice snake allusions in this as well between the copper head and cotton mouth….
Thank you Brian you never miss anything I love that =)
Nice imagery..I really enjoyed the opening stanza..
Thank you so much =)
You are like the US marine Corps, MLM , you never leave any of tour own behind….the dark and the light dance beautifully balanced in you……
Oh wow thank you so much =)
Such a sinister feel to this one … and you with your heathen posies and lavender soul caught in that weaving stare of the snake … fly!
Thank you so much Susan =) Good thing its fictional!
This is so cool. The mid stanza is such a marvelous set of images that just flow so well that I found myself reading it over and again just for the enjoyment. .
Thank you very much Scott =)
“I’ve got a head full
Of heathen posies,
And a lavender soul”
Ah, that’s gorgeous!
Thank you so much!
The opening line made me wary of the “Copper-mouthed
Carnivore”. wine on a silk dress can only spell trouble!
Thank you Robyn =) Indeed sinister happening are afoot
This is marvelous! Can’t choose my favorite stanza, love them all.
Oh thank you so much Lisa that is so sweet =)
Beautifully spun 🙂
Thank you so much =)
You weaved such fantastic imagery…wow
Thank you very much =)
Holy cow. I LOVE this. Especially:
“ambidextrous
Heart pocketing the sunrise
And sunset in the same
Thieving swoop”
Fantastic.
Thank you so much! That makes me very happy =)
Awesome poetry … hypothetical prime (brilliant.)
Awww thanks =)
The imagery is rich in depth and daring. I love it.
Thank you Helena!
A lavender soul..what a thing to be possessed by..this moves like a beautiful dance..
Thank you so much =)
Forceful and effective…
Thanks!
So many delicious words here in the oh so artful piece. Lavender soul will stay with me for a long time.
Thank you very much Barbara =)
I feel the power!
Thank you haha
A head full of heathen posies…oh I love that!
Thank you Tess!