The theme this week is fear and while last week’s prompt was dedicated to poetry this weeks submissions aren’t limited to poetry so feel free to submit short stories, songs, photos etc. You can take a serious approach or a lighthearted one. Since my writing is usually very serious I decided to go for a lighter approach, I don’t usually write humor so this was a new experience for me! Rather than reveal a fear you can also tell a ghost story and scare the rest of us! You can also of course relay something true, some societal horror or what not. I am very flexible to interpretations so really just run wild. Please try to read and comment on everyone’s submissions. Just click the Mister Linky to add a submission and to locate the submissions of other participants =) I really am scared of centipedes btw and this is a true story. My submission is below.
Centipede
There I was, entrenched in monologue
Not one of those monologues confined
To introspective silence but one whose
Animated vocalization calls into question
Sanity, when I heard it, a scream so shrill
That it chips away at the enamel, a scream
So eerie that it abrades the bones and nerves
Simultaneously, like the application of
Keratin to slate. For a moment I wondered
If the sound resided within my own body
The screeching of my neurons grinding to
A halt as if my own company were not
Proving sufficiently stimulating!
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Turning slowly to the wall, which I found
In disagreeable proximity to my face, I saw it
Three inches of shuddering exoskeleton,
Three inches of commensurate insect limbs
Poised vertically on an otherwise naked
Surface, impossible to deny. A rust-colored
Centipede shrieking in agony whether at
The imposition of my presence or at the
Content of my externally projected thoughts
I can’t say but there it was, omitting an
Earsplitting electrical pulse like the
Magnetostriction of a cathode ray
Television suspended in my direct
Line of vision and there I was
All 64 inches of tremulous
Endoskeleton screaming at the
Top of my lungs as I ran out
The door. Dignity? What dignity?!
I forgot Mr. Linky lol
I am going to suggest to you that you keep your ‘prompt site’ separate from your individual blog. You are just getting the prompt off the ground. Why not start a separate blog just for the prompt rather than mixing it in with your blog? Just an idea….that way YOU can link your poem right in the ‘prompt site’ as well. Rather than having it right WITH the prompt. Anyway, it is up to you. Thanks for the mention of Poetry Jam and Poets United, both of which I am involved with. Anyway, I will try to visit you every Sunday to see what’s going on….
Fantastic I will have a look! I think it might be that I was young that I could hear it. Thanks for the suggestions =)
You tell a good story! I love “like the magnetostrication of a cathode ray” – BTW, thanks for stopping by my blog as well, I appreciate your comments. Cheers!
Thank you Bonnie!
I clicked the link to link to my post but it didn’t seem to link to yours so I’m not sure what happened – let me know if it doesn’t register for you.
It does work like it should I just need to be able to see what you have written and I could so yay!
Yay!! 🙂
Going to bed soon mlm – and I am certain ‘fear’ will overtake my thoughts and delay sleep -mind buzzing with ideas now!
Will link when put into words – which probably wont be today…
Until then.
Anna :o]
I will look forward to it Anna =) Sweet dreams!
hahaha all dignity goes out the window in that moment eh? its interesting how our fears magnify things…your descriptions def set the tone for this as well…
have an older short story piece that i wrote…one of my favs…
Thank you Brian, I wanted to try being silly/absurd for a change. I am off to read yours now =)
I actually missed this side of your writing, ha ~
Good topic. I will come back later today hopefully. Enjoyed your poem on your fear of centipedes. I still REALLY hate bugs…but I had to get over it when I was living alone and there was no one to get rid of them besides me. If a centipede appeared, no one would care if I screamed. I had to deal with it. LOL. Necessity ruled fear finally.
I was still a kid with the centipede hence being able to hear that high-pitched sound. I am probably too old to hear them now lol I am married but my husband is scared of bugs too so we take turns. Centipedes are the scariest to me so he deals with those and I have to deal with earwigs “shudders” I look forward to your submission =)
I have NEVER heard that high pitched sound. I truly do hate them too, but I will do what I have to do. Good that your husband deals with them now. I have written my ‘fear’ poem now. It is current, about my real fears of ‘today.’ I will be making the rounds to see what others have written.
Centipedes? Ha Ha Ha! How can a creature with so many legs move so slowly? I guess more legs doesn’t equal more speed. I think God must have run out of normal creatures to invent so he made something ridiculous just for fun. But it’s not even that bad . . . consider the millipede.
Fear, this is a great prompt for me. Fits into my dark side which is what I really like to write about.
I have seen a centipede run at top speed because one actually charged me! That particular one was fast as hell like the fucking flash seriously lol You know they can be very poisonous and it is supposed to burn like hell when they bite I haven’t been bitten though. My husband got stung by something that actually made a small chunk of his flesh just fall off once. I am okay with millipedes they look less creepy lol I look forward to your submission!
The ending made me smile but it is so true ~
Interesting to see your challenges and will have to link up some time ~
Have a good Sunday ~
I would love if you participated feel free to jump in at anytime. This one has a full week left so feel free =)
I’m just starting to get the hang of things on wordpress. I like the poem and would love to contribute. Looks like a lot of fun and a great way for writers to get familiar with each other’s work.
By all means feel free to participate we’d love to have you! Welcome to wordpress I have found it to be a warm and friendly community I love it. I could give you links to other prompts if you’d like as well!
Yes! That would be an excellent way to find my way around. Thank you!
Okay I have a few for you
Theme Thursday
http://www.theme-thursday.com/
Carry on Tuesday
http://carryontuesdayprompt.blogspot.se/
Magpie Tales
http://magpietales.blogspot.se/
3 Word Wednesday
http://www.threewordwednesday.com/
Haiku Heights (only Haiku)
http://haiku-heights.blogspot.se/
Poetry Jam
http://poetryjaam.blogspot.se/
Sunday Scribbles
http://sundayscribblings.blogspot.se/
Poets United
http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.se/
We Write Poems
http://wewritepoems.wordpress.com/
Hey Thanks! I’ll check ’em out.
http://www.dversepoets.com
we have several link ins each week…
Great! Thanks and I’ll be checking out that address you gave me.
When I first joined I couldn’t find anything! If someone hadn’t randomly signed my into a contest I might still be lost lol Enjoy =)
Indeed I will. I must have added the incorrect link, as someone informed me. I wasn’t sure I even succeded, but I’ll try to get it right next time, applogies!
ah’ight den, here ya go. Nowadays, one of my favorite sayings is, “Ain’t skeert.” But there was a time–many years, in fact–where that wasn’t the case.
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2013/05/05/flashlight-duty-2/
I’ve never encountered a centipede and don’t wish to! I’m generally not scared of bugs but don’t relish when I find them crawling on ME! I’m one of those crazies that tries to capture and release them unharmed, except mosquitoes which I despise!
Lucky you they are terrifying lol I try to catch release most things but centipedes are too scary for me!
I enjoyed your centipede poem!
I’ve posted an old limerick of mine about fear and superstition. Sunday’s the launch of my weekly Limerick-Off challenges. So I fear that keeps me too busy to write something new today. But I’ll try to get back later this week with a new fear poem. Thanks!
Your limerick is wonderfully charming! I am not too superstitious but sometimes the crazies get me lol
Since you’re listing prompt sites, may I add my Mad Kane’s weekly LImerick-Offs to the list? Thanks:
Mad Kane’s Limerick-Offs
Absolutely! You may =) I look forward to reading your limerick feel free to add as many as you like
Good one. Bob Dylan wrote: “Somebody said dignity was the first to leave.”
That is absolutely true haha thanks
Yeah when I went to work last Monday one of those leggy little critters was waiting to scare the crap out of me when I turned my light on, talk about bugging out 😉 – very good, keep mixing it up with your writing, as someone once said to me – humor is gold.
Thanks! They are dreadful aren’t they 😛
Finally linked up mlm!
Sorry – must go to bed now (work tonight) – should have been in bed hours ago!
So will read others entries when I get up and tomorrow morning.
Anna :o]
Sweet Dreams Anna we will be here
Oh heck mlm – really messed the link up! Could you please delete the first two?
Off to bed now!
Anna :o]
How do I do that the little x’s that usually are there aren’t lol My budget Mr. Linky is annoying lol
I hope you do add a separate blog for your prompts as I am most interested. Also, you wrote about me. That would be me screaming like I was being murdered at the sight of a bug, especially a centipede! Well done!
Thanks Maggie =) I am not all savvy with creating websites and it would have to be free lol I still haven’t figured out how to add a Blog Roll, I am pretty hopeless I am afraid
Finally made it by. Can’t always promise I will, but I do promise to try. 😀
Well it is always a pleasure to have you!
I am now to the whole prompt thing–but Mary has a good point–and me? I didn’t even know you had a prompt! Loved this, esp the ending!
Thanks Audrey! I need a tutorial on wordpress/webpages before I take on anything big lol
That was interesting…but, somehow I hate centipedes…ewww 🙂
Me too! They are so creepy. Feel free to add a submission I’d love to have you!
Wish I could just barp saying- huh…you scared of centipedes, but Alas, I got better and grave phobias….for all kinda insects and reptiles 😛
Nice take on the prompt 🙂
Thanks feel free to participate Ainy we’d love to have you!
Okay, I’m going to try this again with a piece of prose. —— Seems like it worked this time. I must be getting better at this!
You did it perfectly! Fantastic story =)
I left two poems. One for each date.
Where is the 2nd one? I read the first and it was absolutely stunning =)
mr linky on the day 2
All in a daze work…
I read the submission under Mr. Linky on Fear Prompt (which is fabulous) was it a combination of the two prompts, is there another poem somewhere? Or did you only mean you wrote a poem for this prompt lol Forgive me if my brain has abandoned me
I up loaded 2 separate poems Prick of loneliness and losing you fear. Both mr linkys were still open to allow more poems to be added. I hope that was clear of mud…
I understand what happened my Prompt 1 isn’t showing Mr, Linky anymore do you mind giving me the link here so I can read it?
http://booguloo.wordpress.com/2013/03/21/comfort-and-peace/
http://booguloo.wordpress.com/2013/05/09/continuance-2/
https://booguloo.wordpress.com/2013/05/09/losing-your-fear/
I think..
Thanks so much Michael your submissions were all wonderful! I am so happy you participated =)
Thanks for your nice comments.
You are most welcome and deserving!
this is such a great piece of poetry. brilliant.
Thanks Baishali feel free to submit your own =)
I hate those creep crawly things 🙂
They are awfully creepy! Feel free to participate in the prompt we’d love to have you!
a little late due to a wee problem but I wrote a poem of fear…my experience the first moments of spinning into a vortex of fear…couldn’t find mr linky. hope he’s not spinning in the same hole I am…
http://oldgrizz.blogspot.com/2013/05/fear.html
That’s fine if ever you are late but still want to respond to a prompt just link your poem to the most recent prompt so everyone is sure to see it with a little note as to what prompt your are responding to =) I am always happy to see you!
whoooo…by reading this I’ll definitely be scared of centipedes. Interesting imagery 🙂
Haha thanks Tino =)
I reblog’d this, but it doesn’t give a url.. However it should be the first Unless I post another one.. Michael
I could access Mr. Linky now weird because before it was invisible. I really loved the poem I just of your very dark, very strong, gut-wrenching