Translucent vision
Priestess of empyrean
Ghosting eminence
Unfettered apparition
Swaying inside the ether
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I realize my poetry tends to be dark, writing makes me happy though and excising the negative keeps me sane. Still its probably good for me and refreshing for you if I write *pretty* poems sometimes. Well I am not so good at pretty but that is all the more reason I should practice. This is for Becca Givens whose poetry always embodies light and warmth.
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I like your poetry whether dark or light, ugly or pretty. Your poems have depth and feeling.
Awww thank you so much Dan I am glad
I have to agree with Dan.
Thanks so much!
it doesnt matter if your poems are dark. there is this strange cryptic beauty about them i love so much. this one was equally lovely.. keep going!!
Thank you so much =) I try to challenge myself from time to time, to keep from getting stale
OMG – what an honor!!!
When I first read this … earlier today – I could not comment. I was blown away; speechless with the results of my eyes immediately started to water … very touching … the piece and the dedication. Thank you!!
Your creative path is varied and filled with talent! Continue investigating, experimenting and speaking your truth for all to enjoy … xoxo
I am so happy to hear that *hugs*
I love this .. totally enticing 😉
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On edge of my dreams,
I sit perched and alert
to trap any shadow
that passes into them;
unless of course
you wish to wander
along my river of desire
and drink from the pool
that i guard just for you ..
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don’t know if you like this or not; I was totally inspired from the image …
I think its beautiful Nimue =) Thank you so much for sharing! I am so glad you enjoyed it and my poem inspired you
your poetry is mesmerizing whether dark or light. and i agree with you 100% about Becca. a very sweet dedication. ♥
Thank you so much Dani =)