You are the black moon calling
The impendence of night
Darkness uncompromising
I have seen your blood-torn rage
The way it desecrates
The holiness within
*
You were a man once
But longing has left
You derelict
Fastened by grief
I have seen her eyes
Reflected in your hysteria
*
You hold me
In the place of love
And beneath you
I am unmade
Recast in her image
But never the same
Barely even a reprieve
In your malaise
*
We will never be wed
Except through pain
Every night
I catch you
At the window
Haunted by what if
*
She waits
In your shadow
Seeking forgiveness
Yet you do not absolve
No matter the casualties
I know that
She will remain
Between worlds
Imprisoned
And I, in her semblance
Mortally bound
*
We suffer the avarice
Of your half lives
Draped in shadows
I know that you will
Wait indefinitely
a really good story at that though…nice writing
Thank you very much =)
Beautiful words put together. I feel the sadness deeply in your writing.
Thank you so much for your compliments and the like =) I am glad to hear that the feelings were conveyed
The poem is very well suited with the background of your blog (:
Good poem.
-RPIMotion Author
Thank you =) I can’t seem to settle on a background but I think dark colors are more suiting
Lovely in a dark, melancholic way. Beautifully sad writing that captures the emotions and images so well.
Thank you for your lovely compliments =)
You really captivated me! This story is awesome, I was about to cry. I could almost feel myself trapped inside someone else`s shadow, being unable to be and yet becoming someone who “is”.
Happy Rally!
Aww thank you I am glad that it reached you
I like this poem. It reminds me of my muse.
Oh? That’s really intriguing. Thank you so much for the comments and the subscription!
My favorite is:
“I know beneath you
I am unmade
Recast in her image”
…very poignant. I like how you kept the tone through the entire poem. Nice
Thank you very much, I am so glad you liked it =)
Reblogged this on mindlovemisery and commented:
Unrelated to this poem
It is my husband’s birthday XD
Happy birthday to Sam!
Wow! That is extraordinary, you have surpassed even yourself, which is saying something! This is blisteringly, heartbreakingly powerful! Oh, and happy birthday to your husband!! 🙂
Oh wow Helen that is an extraordinary compliment thank you
Powerful poem. Beautiful dress and Happy Birthday to your husband.
Awww thank you so much
Wonderfully moving, so sad. Oh happy belated to the hubs!
Thanks Melanie!