I’ve contemplated your loss
In those moments when the threat
Of war overrides all known egress
*
My features would be the first to fall
For the heart cannot grasp its fatality
In the instant that it has been slain
*
Without you there is no use of perception
And if still intact I’d remove my eyes
Forcibly for their failure to incite in you
One iota of regenerative sympathy
*
My heart having been preserved
By your grace would demoralize
And I’d use its brokenness
As an excuse for all subsequent
Defamation of my moral character
*
My muse would pluck every feather
Ever incurred by your faith
Before heading south in search
Of more animate hosts
Leaving me with no means
To articulate or purge my grief
*
The world would find no aperture
With which to reenter, no fissure
Within which hope might thread
For I would have become as stone
Under the gravity
Of a more oppressive orbit
*
I would set the television to winter
That I might claim my yellow lane
Amongst the victimized dead
For there is no cell within that could
Supersede our collective existence
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I especially admire the 2nd to final verse ~
Thanks so much!
I love it as well, especially this part:
“For I would have become as stone
Under the gravity
Of a more oppressive orbit”
I really love it when science terms are used in poetry.
I am glad you do because I am inclined to throw them in lol I love love love anatomy and physiology it can be hard to hold back on those
Looking forward to more poems from you with scientific jargon! 😀
Thanks =)
‘For the heart cannot grasp its fatality
In the instant that it has been slain’
no, tragically it doesn’t,
what a brilliant observation.
Thank you so much =)
This is very good Yves, I like the idea of setting the television to winter. Loved it.
Thank you Michael I am so happy you liked it!
Very deep, your writing always has so many layers to it!! 🙂 🙂
Well it is winter (sorry I couldn’t help being lame) lol
LOLOL!!! 🙂 🙂
“I would set the television to winter” – I love this line, and I agree with Helen – your writing has so many layers. Wonderful:)
Awww thank you Bianca you are so kind =) The older works that are untagged have not been edited yet. I have tags and photos for the stuff I’ve finished at least in the very beginning of my blog. I have only looked at the first 3 pages so far and I still have some ways to go. I am hoping as I get further along it will require less work