Death-and-surrealism-alice

I’ve contemplated your loss

In those moments when the threat

Of war overrides all known egress

*

My features would be the first to fall

For the heart cannot grasp its fatality

In the instant that it has been slain

*

Without you there is no use of perception

And if still intact I’d remove my eyes

Forcibly for their failure to incite in you

One iota of regenerative sympathy

*

My heart having been preserved

By your grace would demoralize

And I’d use its brokenness

As an excuse for all subsequent

Defamation of my moral character

*

My muse would pluck every feather

Ever incurred by your faith

Before heading south in search

Of more animate hosts

Leaving me with no means

To articulate or purge my grief

*

The world would find no aperture

With which to reenter, no fissure

Within which hope might thread

For I would have become as stone

Under the gravity

Of a more oppressive orbit

*

I would set the television to winter

That I might claim my yellow lane

Amongst the victimized dead

For there is no cell within that could

Supersede our collective existence

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16 thoughts on “Static

      1. I love it as well, especially this part:

        “For I would have become as stone
        Under the gravity
        Of a more oppressive orbit”

        I really love it when science terms are used in poetry.

  1. “I would set the television to winter” – I love this line, and I agree with Helen – your writing has so many layers. Wonderful:)

    1. Awww thank you Bianca you are so kind =) The older works that are untagged have not been edited yet. I have tags and photos for the stuff I’ve finished at least in the very beginning of my blog. I have only looked at the first 3 pages so far and I still have some ways to go. I am hoping as I get further along it will require less work

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